by DorineHighcoven
Like that it has progressed to a more overt sexual role reversal. Looking forward to your next chaptet
The quality of the writing is much better than prior versions. Well done! Looking forward to more !!!
Thanks levski118. I agree that my writing has come a long way. Hopefully it will continue to improve.
Wow! Just wow!
I am not really into Femdom, but your world and your great writing style got me hooked.
Very well done and thank you for sharing it with us.