All Comments on 'Relief, in 750 Words'

Lucky the hero didn't need to take a dump!

5

Truly hilarious!

That is a hoot and a holler. A just juxtaposition of discovery of and retribution upon the cheaters. 5*

Funny, well written. I don’t usually enjoy water sports but in this case an exception.

Excellent! I found that story very enjoyable. I bet it made me feel as good as the protagonist must have felt after draining his bladder. Golden showers are an under-utilized form of revenge and comedic relief.

The Mexican ending was over the top but what can we ask for when you dedicate 32 words of a 750 word story to an epilogue. (34 if you count contractions as two)

Bravo!

Funny! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

That was quite funny

Ha! Relief in more ways than one.

very funny

Super BTB!

I love the title, so underused in this manner.

Your second funny story. You're getting good at this. More!

Not what I expected - great story! Wonder what the other wife saw by the time she got there...

Hee hee - good one!

Golden showers is normally a bit of a gross subject but this one was I feel thoroughly deserved. BardnotBard

Loved it! That was Great!!

I will be giggling about this for a long time.

Not bad. I was thinking four stars until you brought in the road-westy Mexican Whitehouse trope. Two star reduction. Two star story because of that.

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JPB NOT BOB