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Another five star chapter in this sexy series. Keep them cumming!

Great read, nice to see after checking everyday for the past few days. Kinda wish there was more that happened with Sara, but hopefully more will happen in the next chapter. Take your time writing the next chapter bur hopefully we'll see it in the next few months before the year ends hopefully.

really good chapter but all it's feels like build up for ch 16.

It's a request to pls increase reading time for Karen and Jacob story line in ch 16.

As the reading time for Karen and Jacob was not much in this chapter as it was in previous chapters.

Thank you for your hard work.

Really a great chapter still my favourite is chapter 13 second half and chapter 14 beginning part.

Here are some of my personal fantasise pls include in ch 16 or in future parts if you like any.

1. Jacob and Karen making out in camping trip .

2. Jacob and Karen making out in zoo.

3. Karen fu¢ked by grandpa.

4. karen Highschool flashback in which you can introduce her old lover.

5. Karen dp by Jacob and his best friend. (Dp)

6. Karen dp by Scott and Jacob.

I did enjoy this chapter a lot and I want to appreciate the author on his ability to convey such vivid images of Halloween party I felt like I'm there with them PS. don't listen to the whiners

Worth the wait, another amazing chapter in the best series I have ever read on this site.

Looking forward to mom's pregnancy

Ohh RTR made us wait for so long to give this shit

Oh come on

First you start the chapter with same scene from Rachel's perspective was so unnecessarily long.

And so many unwarranted dialogues and unnecessary writing making it so long for no reason ,leading no where

Atlast you gave us one scene with Karen and Jake which was so poorly written

You couldve made them stop at there house while coming from Sara's and have amazing sex scene but no

This has been a utter disappointment I'm so done with this story waiting for so long anticipating for something good in the end got absolute shit.

well worth the wait--thank you O_S and rtr

Epic!

If this had been written during the Halloween contest season you would’ve been the winner hands down

This was quite a roller-coaster of a chapter and, despite certain comments, well worth the wait!! I have enjoyed it a lot, and I am looking forward to read the next one and discover how things progress. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. Always take your time so that the final story is as good as you desire. ^__^

5 STARS ALL THE WAY /DORTHY NEVER LOOKED SO GOOD/HAHA!

Jacob was busy this overdue Halloween season, but Karen Mitchell is really cutting loose more, more each escalating encounter with those Wicked Hormones and we wouldn't want it any other way. I wonder how Karen will cut loose next in the chapter As Rachel makes some supposing revelations about herself becoming more like mom with more Wicked implications going forward with the between the siblings. Including the honesty thing between Jacob & Rachel went better than I thought and could have gone a lot worser for Jacob, but she's taking it better than I thought she would. those Wicked hormones are doing their job around the neighborhood,

As Jacob gets into double trouble with Aunt and sister Rachel while popping his sister's anal cheery

I never look at Wizard of Oz with Karen & Jacob again after their latest yummy escapade in the sisters Pool house with a lot more Rachel Pov from her angle with her waiting her turn with her voyeurism of the festivities.

Hopefully the next on won't as long in the Wicked Hormones Series.

Your Best work yet

Continue on

Cheers!

Oh yeah, 9 months later….Karen & Jake gonna have an inc3st baby!!!

Conceived: October 31, 2021

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Hell yeah finally, great chapter as always!

This one did not feel like the rest. Not that it was bad but felt like there was a lot calmer than the rest. Feels also like a cure is coming and the fun will end.

Great writing!

Can't wait for the family to really go for the swimmers.

Or the Sara mistery to be reveiled.

Absolutely awesome chapter. The women of the family are coping pretty hard. No way an increasingly more confident jake is giving up his superpower. Looking forward to more. Especially hoping to see him dominate Sara’s mom.

Tftc RTR9209!

Long wait was worth it. Thank you so much for the high quality as always

“First you start the chapter with same scene from Rachel's perspective was so unnecessarily long.”

THAT TOOK UP ONE PAGE (OUT OF 16)! DOUCHE

“And so many unwarranted dialogues and unnecessary writing making it so long for no reason ,leading no where”

NOT EVERYONE IS LAZY & CLUELESS AT READING-COMPREHENSION LIKE YOU

“Atlast you gave us one scene with Karen and Jake which was so poorly written

You couldve made them stop at there house while coming from Sara's and have amazing sex scene but no”

AS IF THEY PLANNED TO FUCK ON THE DL…GOD UR DUMB!

“This has been an utter disappointment I'm so done with this story waiting for so long anticipating for something good in the end got absolute shit.”

BYE FELICIA….F*** OFF!!!

FACT: You can’t hope write anything close to what RTR and OS can do—so you s**t on EVERY chapter because of your IMPATIENCE & UTTER LAZINESS!!!

If you can’t contribute anything positive to the feedback I dunno why some people even bother to post such shite takes. Keep that crap to yourself. smdh

Looks like this is gonna be the last super long chapter, so they can get released sooner, but probably some people will whine about that too! Newsflash: RTR and O_S are offering this story to us for free and yet you still complain 🙄

There’s always that one douchebag among the first comments who ruins the mood and good vibes for everybody. After so long a wait, this is what causes authors to lose heart and delays…which the crappy commenter will probably complain about too!

Crap. It could have been a 2 page chapter if you remove all the unnecessary conversations. 11 pages and I can't read it more. 1 year to write this shit ?? Author has lost its plot. Do everyone a favor and end it in chapter 16.

so sara's asthma medication(s) somehow reduce her sensitivity and arousal to the pheromones in Jake's fluids?

Great chapter, but I’m hoping Karen submits a bit more soon. Perhaps during the presumed photoshoot scene she gets so horny she start’s actually begging for it.

Awesome chapter looking forward to seeing more. Especially seeing jake dominate Karen. Sara’s mom could also do with some spanking and hair pulling (maybe bdsm)?

Tftc!

Amazing chapter. Scene idea for chapter 16: Jake should use Karen from behind while pulling on her pigtails, which his lovely mother so mindfully braided for her costume. Also Karen should start using the word "breeding" instead of "getting pregnant" as in "Jake, sweetie, I know you have a male instinct to breed me when you pump your semen so deep inside of me, but we should be careful."

The wait was worth it.

Everyone seems to be falling more and more under the pheromones influence and are also willing to get into increasingly risky situations.

I hope Karen and Jacob aren't going to be so stupid as to keep any images/videos they may or may not make, on a computer/phone/tablet/whatev instead of an easy to hide card or stick.

But on the other side i also hope they are THAT stupid :D

I wonder if Saras 'immunity' to the pheromones is because of her allergies or the Asthma-spray.

Hope to see some threesome, or even foursome action in the next chapter.

Anyways, thanks for sharing

Worst chapter of the series.

Now there’s TWO idiots too lazy to read and just want wham bam thank you ma’am chapters…ignore these fools RTR & OS. Most of us would rather wait longer for great, continuous reads and slow burn style than rushed out snippets just to satisfy the Attention Deficit Disorder crowd (who’ll probably STILL complain!)

Looking forward to when Karen gives in and finally talks dirty to Jacob…there’s so many hints and foreshadowing in ch. 15 for anyone who bothers to look for them:

- Karen + Jacob + Rachel 3some

- Karen + Jacob + Brenda 3way??

- Karen & Rachel breastfeeding (hopefully short as lesbian scenes not as popular)

- explanation for Sara’s immunity to Jacob’s pheromones

- Jacob convincing Karen to talk dirty during sex

- possible Jacob is the one who impregnates Brenda and Rachel in the next few months…

- Midoxinol pills end trial run soon, so Karen too will be off birth control = pregnancy???

Hmmm…but instead we have a couple people too lazy to read in depth into the dialogue and skip/miss these juicy plot points…smh

“Worst chapter of the series.”

Worst poster in the comments. Lazy pajeeeeeeeet!

Take your ritalin, f*cken ADD “readers”. Then maybe, you can understand all the hard words and events being described, and be able to read all those long pages! Losers

First let me say this: Wicked Hornones is the best series ever on Lit. I’ve read each chapter dozens of times. The best imo are the first few and the trip to Atl. I knew after Atl. that it was all downhill bc you simply can’t top that. I appreciate RTR continuing to publish. However, even with all the great writing and vivid imagery in this chapter, it is such a serious letdown. Seemingly half the ch. wasted on Rachel and constantly reminding the reader about everything that had already happened. Why? Why waste time explaining to reader what has already taken place, over and over again? But my biggest gripe is we had to wait to page 14 for a Karen scene and it is the worst Karen scene in the whole series. I couldn’t possibly care less about Rachel eavesdropping! Just focus on Karen!! We waited 9 month for ONE damn poorly written Karen scene. God what a disappointment this ch is. Anyways, I kinda hope RTR will end WH and begin a new series bc there’s nowhere left to go but having an all out orgy with all characters which is where every one of these stories ends up and it always sucks. The best part of WH is how conservative and reluctant Karen is but that’s over now so why not begin a new series with a new mom similar to Karen? Please take this under advisement RTR. Like I said, WH is far and away the best on lit but it’s time to start a new one.

Thanks to you watching a Dodger vs Braves game will never be the same. 5 Stars

Loved the chapter can’t wait for the next one. Don’t pay any attention to the negative comments RTR & OS we are more than happy to wait for the next chapter

I agree this was a predictable chapter. Disappointing. Low quality.

lmfao….LA Chokers! accurate

The rehash of the shower scene from Rachel’s POV isn’t as long as some make it out to be—it’s literally just the last half of the first page and the first half of the 2nd page (so ONE page total out of a total of SIXTEEN!) And obviously the whole chapter can’t be just one big, long Karen-Jacob fuckfest otherwise there’s no buildup to it and the novelty of it will be overused after a while. Go find another story if you’re so sick of this series already. I will agree that the plot needs to be advanced further….seems like it’s been stuck in a holding pattern the last few chapters. Needs progression on the cure front, the Karen giving into getting knocked up front, etc.

I disagree Klubot. The story from early on set up that it’s not just about Karen and Jacob. You can not like that scene, but we got a Rachel and Brenda scene to. There’s also plenty that the story can go. Karen still hasn’t fully submitted, Donna still isn’t fully committed yet, and there’s potential for Sara having some fun. Plus it’s up in the air if there’s an antidote, and what it might mean. Could have the fun end, or maybe some don’t want to stop, or maybe they convince him not to take it. Could also make it a booster, giving new or increased effects.

When is Rachel flat on her back! I want Jake ploughing her through her mattress, legs up. Mom needs flat on her back again, and we need another session with Mrs Turner. Why hasn’t he “toured” the University of Georgia yet? When’s that college tour coming? It should be somehow, Robert can’t go, Karen knows that’s Rachel knows about them, all 3 go on the your to Georgia and Jake plough his mom and sister separately in hotel beds all night. After that IDC how else the story goes.. but good put the ladies on their backs sometimes.. it’s allways doggie, cowgirl.

Rachel is so jealous of Jake filling Karen’s pussy, I’d like to see next chapter or two a college trip to U Georgia,, and Rachel legs up, on her back and Jacob fucking her silly. I’d like to see more sex scenes with him between their legs.. legs pointing upward, and dressed a little more see ily, but not slutty. Bring hotels into the equation. He’s needs to pound Aunt Brenda alone with her on her back too

This long awaited chapter reaffirms that this is one of the best stories published here.

The evolution of the plot line keeps everyone waiting for more.

Fantastic

First 14 chapters are great but 15 is pale in comparison. All the h1b holders are commenting that this is great chapter don't understand quality.

2 star

Great chapter!! Screw the haters, it was very entertaining. Would love to see some more action with the preacher’s wife and even the girlfriend. Loving the foreshadowing of sister joining in a fhreesum.

The best part of the chapter CLEARLY was him fucking Aunt Brenda. She’d wear nylons for him I thought

All the H1B holders want this to be gay & woke with granny sex…short, rushed chapters to satisfy their impatient, poor reading comprehension, pea-sized brains.

valio la gran espera

I agree that this is the best story I have read on this website, hands-down. It’s the only author I’ve ever sent an actual message to. The highlight for me was the fucking in Rachel’s bed while she tried to talk to Scott, but I am most intrigued by aunt Brenda‘s fantasy of all three of them Getting fucked by Jake at the same time. That is the foursome that needs to happen. I also think that now that Karen has tasted another woman she might easily be swayed to indulge her daughter

Delightful and funny, this story is always worth the wait.

I hope grandpa gets some karen

All the woke mind shit lovers giving it 5*

This is literotica guys please don’t take it too seriously. RTR sweetie this chapter is lovely and steamy, your collab is working! Now I have to wait for 16 🥲🥲

Agreed on this being Lit’s best ongoing series. I look forward to these chapters more than any other story on this site. Some of these negative comments are baffling - this series has a level of quality I would gladly pay for, RTR is absolutely spoiling us by putting them out for free.

@RTR - if you’re reading this, you rock, easy 5 stars, thanks for another brilliant chapter. I may be in the minority, but I honestly don’t mind waiting for longer periods and getting longer chapters in return. You do you, man.

'Another wave of cheers burst in from the main house as the flimsy, pale blue garment slid down Karen's stocking-clad legs and pooled around her ankles and ruby-red stilettos.'

This is really good porn.

Very well told story. Too many stories are quick to "get to the good stuff." This story has been slowly building the characters and story lines.

Can't wait for more.

Great story, but could we make the mom a little less annoying?

Love the Rachel backstory and filling out her character more…with her ‘tomboy’ past, I definitely see her as open to bi/lesbian scenes with Karen and/or Brenda and maybe Ms. Turner down the line, plus she’s already craving some of that Karen milk 🍼🤤 It’s FAR more enjoyable a read when a character’s background is more well-rounded and we get to see what goes on in their mind more. Don’t give in to the naysayers and impatient readers who want quick-released ‘wham-bam’ stories that jump right to the sex scenes and rely on cliched, two-dimensional characters. Also, readers must bear in mind dialogue during sex scenes is only so limited without being repetitive (and having the characters overly describe their acts would stretch believability) therefore having a third person narrative of what’s going on inside their mind helps alleviate that.

"STOP IT!"

Everyone at the table ceased talking, and Karen looked up to find that suddenly, all eyes were upon her. Trying to escape the awkward moment in the spotlight, she picked up her coffee cup and quickly sipped the hot beverage, setting the cup back down slowly to steady her nerves. Scanning the table sheepishly, her eyes were then inextricably drawn to Jacob's. With a nervous smile, and a raised right hand, she finally asked, "So...who wants some more creampi-- creamcakes?"

LMFAO! yup….Karen is (secretly) addicted to getting knocked up by her son 😈 not subliminal at all /s

Also, all these “hot flashes” Karen’s having whenever she’s jealous are either a sign of: 1) menopause or, more intriguingly….2) she’s ALREADY pregnant and the trial birth control Brenda gave her isn’t working, being overpowered by Jacob’s hormones. Fuck, that would be great and hot!

This was great! How long will we have to wait for chapter 16?

I wish Sarah‘s mom was involved

option #3) Karen’s hot flashes are a symptom of the WICKtropin and Midoxinol hormones epically battling it out in her system, to decide whether she’s getting knocked up or not…one pill a day vs multiple Jacob “injections” a day, guess which one wins out??? 😈

For a story that comes out once in 9 months, it's just repetitive and boring. No increased dominace on Jake's end, no anal fuck for Karen, no aggressive throatfuck for any woman. And no involvement of Sarah's mom or her butt being taken. Now there are so many female characters that we would have to wait 1 & half years for them to have an encounter with Jake.

Just venting. You do you RTR. See you in 2025.

I have now read all 15 chapter, hope the next one doesn't take as long.

I really like the characters and the at least plausible reason for all this debauchery, great stuff

See you guys in 2025

I'm impressed with the story you've written here. Truly among the best I have read. Keep it up.

Great Chapter, but I seem to recall he knocked up his Mom, Sister, the DA, his Aunt and possibly his girlfriend's Mom. So what happened with that? Plus, a lot of great sex, but nit a lit of plot movement in this chapter. By now i would have expected at least some feedback medically some fallout or a repeat of ducking his girlfriend's Mom (that was totally Hot) maybe a threesome, Mom/Daughter, Mom/Girlfriend? Maybe full on cucking of the Dad, Brother-in-Law, Pastor, with them in chastity while the protagonist fucks/impregnates all their women before their eyes...What about the ultimate plan for the WICKTropin this kid has been been subjected to? And the Dr? Lot of room for stuff to happen, but Holy Cow, PLEASE, I'm begging you don't take so long between chapters.

Another great chapter. And as always my favorite part: Jacob nailing Karen. Rtr, I would gladly pay for your stories if you would start ro publish books. Especially if they would come out faster this way. Anyway, thx to you and O_S.

It's getting boring like every other easy slut stories on literotica.

Such a good story. The scene with Brenda getting fucked while her son was just outside the door was so hot! Would love some more Karen scenes with her becoming more depraved and talking shit about her husband.

Great story I just finished all 15 chapters. Great job. Very well written. Fuck all these haters keep doing the good work. Just maybe a little faster. Lol

Need more progress by now on the Karen anal front. Donna Miller needs a comeback. Melissa and Brenda need to meet. Maybe set the next chapter around Thanksgiving and use the one week break high schools usually give to allow the University of Georgia tour (with only Karen and Rachel taking Jacob?) during the early part of the week and then he also fucks them (separately alas) on the down low around the house away from family during Thanksgiving dinner…also Brenda. Have Karen visit Brenda at her clinic to pick up the last of the trial BC pills and discuss what her options are when they run out. Hopefully, Karen goes back to rolling the dice and having risky, Russian roulette unprotected sex with her son…to where her desire to get knocked up clouds her judgement enough to let it happen.

I hope I can get my mother pregnant

love this series. need more! we need a Jacob, Karen and maybe Rachel or one of the others 3some, whatever fits the story at the time, if your going to do the long posts then we need updates on all characters(they are so good) or if you change to shorter (quicker) posts means you can skip some each time probably much easier to do. anyway just my input keep up the great work! Thank you.

Hopefully we don't have to wait a year. Would like for him to start impregnating some of them. Also would like for a thressome with Rachel and Karen. Or just sharing during different times

Much anticipated and can't wait for more. You are a great visual word smith

Really enjoying the story. My selfish wish if for them to avoid taking the antidote or if he takes it that it doesn’t work. Maybe even backfires and makes him more potent.

WHENS THE TOUR AT THE UNIVERSITY OF GEORGIA!! Have dad suddenly not be able to go, due to a last minute business trip. Rachel knowing mom and Jake are fkng, says she wants to go with them, and mom finds out Rachel knows.. one big fuck fest on the college tour

or maybe, the antidote only arrests jacob’s phermones but his cocksize, big balls and huge loads are permanent (same goes for karen’s titsize/lactation and rachel’s squirting). make it a plot twist that the antidote finally gives jacob a growth spurt and he finally looks like an 18yo, as well as if he ejaculates into any woman the antidote causes his sperm to defeat any birth control…

I am personally rooting for Grandpa George to get his share of Karen's pusssy .

Please make it possible in ch 16 or 17 .

NO to grandpa sex, h1b pajeeeeeeets…it would be a waste of pages/reading and would just piss everyone off worse than the lesbian sex. smdh

There are much more ways to demean Karen during sex scenes rather than unfitting grandpa sex.

E.g. Jake can fishhook her mouth when fucking her from behind. He can spit into her mouth. Also, there's no facefucking in this story. This needs to be fixed.

Jake should persuade his mom to talk dirty during sex. Mom should compare the sizes of her head and his cock.

Jake should ask his mom: "mom, can you please make silly poses when I bulge your cheek with my cock? Like a peace sign? mom, can you please fit both of my ballz in your mouth". Karen should get annoyed about the crude language her son is using, scold him and then proceed with fulfilling his lewd requests.

Jake should ask Karen to tie her hair into two pigtails, so that it's easier for him to use her from behind. Karen should say "absolutely not, young man". But then later she can surprise him with 2 pigtails and give a different excuse why she tied her hair into pigtails.

There are so many ways of demeaning our most beloved delicious prim and proper character of Karen. Please feel free to use these ideas.

I hate that foreshadowing of 'grandpa george' whay a way to ruin such a excellent master piece with that garbage. First was with the lesbian scene and now this. I bet the author is gona make Karen screwed with other men and make the MC just accepted. When I tought I finally found gold it seem i was wrong. I'm feeling very dissapointed well time to go and find a real gem because this was one has become just a normal rock.

Great story and amazing that after this many chapters that the story remains interesting!

Now to the Anonymous talentless complainers. F OFF!!! As a fellow contributor to this site the one thing I still hate is negative anonymous comments. Either put your name on it or go F yourselves. We do this for free and these type of crap comments doesn't help anyone. Instead it probably makes some writers quit. Also writers don't want hundreds of suggestions on what to do next.

Excellent story except you make the you go man sound like a spoiled 12 or 13 yr old lacking in any maturity. I cannot wait for the rest

People are reading in too much and overreacting over the Grandpa George possible 'teasing' of he and Karen perhaps doing anything sexual in future chapters...gotta remember, dude's gotta be in his 70's-80's by now and probably can't even 'function' down there, plus Karen's Christian 'piety' would definitely factor in much more to prevent her from even entertaining such a notion, versus her rationalizing for Jacob to 'help' him with his medical condition. All those teasing hints (like Karen always takes a while to drop Grandpa George home, the Halloween incidents, etc.) were just that--TEASING, to spice things up a little, provide some backstory and flesh out a background character more fully.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Nicely done!

please give grandpa George some of Karen help to

I know this is just my opinion, but I say this is the best chapter yet. RTR & OS continue to raise the bar with each chapter. Thank you both for sharing your talents with us and please DO NOT listen to the few trolls on here who probably could not write their way out of a brown paper bag.

To the trolls out there... OMG what is wrong with you? These two people are using their time (for no money by the way) and sharing with us a fun and imaginative story which I hope continues for many more chapters.

Thank you RTR & OS!! No matter how long it takes for you to release chapter 16 I will be here patiently waiting.

no, no, NOOOOOOOO to granpa sex….sick cow-worshippping pajeeeeeet fukcs!!!

Always happy when this updates. looking forward to more of your work. And thank you for all of your writings.

Worst chapter of the otherwise awesome series

I agree, what a crap. Wasted 20 pages

I love this series and hope it never ends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the series,and hope it never ends!!!!!!!!!!!!

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