All Comments on 'Wire-Pulling Pt. 03 (End)'

with the way you ended this, ya could start another one right there.

that was good

@ju8streading

Well... it IS a book series, after all. Feel free to check out my Bio for Tim's story.

That was excellent

Definitely a good first series! Great job!

A well crafted feature length story that has drama, action, and introspection that also is educational. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your work.

A truly awesome tale….wish sex part was also written in detail…

Really good, enjoyed it thoroughly. If there is a future for our hero in other tales, I hope he is more responsible and ... back-up conscious.

Needs more eroticism

Five for you

Great reading, I think I'm going to order your other story.

Now I have nothing to look forward to

Hmmm... Long and not very interesting at all. Your grammar and punctuation was good but the dialogue was wooden and lacked pace. This is borne out by the fact that your readership halved on the second chapter and halved again on the third...

Very enjoyable tale. Thanks for sharing.