by DLostRuler
Loved the story! Small mistakes here and there but not enough to bring me out of the story. One example being missing words (for example "they stared into each other's Aina saw something in Ethan's eyes"), and another using the metric system for Ethan's height but using feet and inches for the rest. Some other small things here and there but no big mistakes as I said earlier.
Keep up the good work and I hope you'll continue writing more and maybe continue with this story as well!
Such a good read! Been a reader for years and this one made me create an account to follow for the next one! Xxx
Ladd_Russo, I tried to edit it myself, but still missed some errors haha. I'm not sure if trying to edit again will make things change, but anyways! I plan on continuing this one and make others, to try and improve my writing, specially smut, as this is my first attempt at that. Thanks for the feedback! It helps a lot.
In college I wrestled a girl who I later found out was on the judo team. I was thrown around and choked into submission. When I came to I was dressed in a bra and thong with lipstick and makeup and tied up in a chair. She said it was time to teach me a lesson as she pulled out me cock, tied a pink ribbon tightly around my balls and slowly stroked my cock. As I moaned like a whore she continued until the doorbell rang. Her boyfriend walked in and asked what did we have here. He unzipped his pants and shoved his cock in my mouth and told me to suck it. After he blew his load they carried me to the bed while I was still tied up. I was bent over the bed with my ass exposed as I felt the pressure of his cock head against my anus. His girlfriend grabbed me by the hair as she positioned her pussy in front on my face. As I licked and ate her I felt the thrust of his cock all the way to his balls. She came with a groan just as he blew his load in my ass. Before they untied me I was told that I would be available for their use whenever they desired. My compliance was assured by the numerous pictures from both ends and while tied on the bed. Know whenever they want me to stop by they send a picture of me in bondage or with a cock in my ass. Sometimes it pays to lose one for the team.
Really enjoyed the wrestling dominance aspect of this story, particularly love it when a girl is dressed in pantyhose and hotpants and really good at wrestling, as I don't have to pretend that she's more skilled and stronger than me, I get such a rush from being dominated like this... I see this is your first time writing this excellent story, I hope you continue, and looking forward to more :))
Unreadable - too many grammatical errors made tracking the narrative too difficult.
Wow another domineering futa on male who degrades the male, havent read that before at all. Its so bad that you all still need the shock and taboo of uncaring futa on male to find it sexy.
If she didnt want to fuck this up why would she rape him in the first place, because thats what happened, rape, might as well tag that
Of course he wont feel bad he got raped and will hapily be her cock slave instantly, because thats how these things go, any interesting consequences will be pushed aside for degrading futa on male fuckfest, yay