All Comments on 'The Dollhouse Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

i know it's fiction but it is kind of believable.underneath her goody good image mikki has found her inner slut that i believe everyone has,hence why most of us are in here living out our fantasies through others work,probably why the haters love this stuff but ashamed to admit it so vent their spent anger on the authors for reminding them of what they think of their so called weaknesses.anyway i love it keep it up as it certainly gets me up

EroticFrictionEroticFriction9 days agoAuthor

Thank you very much for the feedback @Anonymous, I really appreciate the kind words. Yes, Miki is discovering some thing about herself, 'inner slut' included, and she's going to find herself in ever more boundary-pushing situations as she gets closer to what happened to Gwen.

To all readers - thanks for reading!!!!! And, I appreciate comments very much. What is working for you? What isn't working?

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

Honestly... I just hope for happy ending... For both Miki and Gwen...

EroticFrictionEroticFriction4 days agoAuthor

@Anonymous - Still quite a few turns and twists / ups and downs left before we get into the home stretch, but this story definitely wants to end on a high note.

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Coming back to writing, and what better way to shake the rust off than to write smut! My goal is to write story and character driven filth; I know I have a long way to go but at least it'll be fun getting there. Update (04/10/24): Just uploaded Chapter 5 of The Dollhouse, it...

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