All Comments on 'In Transit Ch. 02'

I simply loved this - subtle, nuanced, erotic and conjures a real life experience - you write brilliantly

This chapter is intriguing, well written, fun, and makes the story worthy of reading on. Unlike the first chapter, which was just, to be honest, gross and really unnecessary (I saw this chapter 1st and started reading it, then went back to read the first for context and wish I hadn’t).

Anyone who knows @melimelissa and her poetry on this platform will understand why I take her remark as very high praise.<3

You strike me as a brilliant and sexually devious lady. One I would love to get to know personally. Your writing is fantastic with the gradual and insidious build-up towards something really out of the character's control.