All Comments on 'My Sister in Law Ch. 01'

Nice. Please continue.

Nice story. Change category. Not incest.

Also switch to correct names Rachel.

David turned to me, as did Karen. David said that Karen had known of the plan all along.

Nicely done. I assume both wives were in on the plan. 😉

5*

Tc

Uh no, perhaps partner swapping, 3 or 4 some? Cluster f..k story to follow soon?

Please try to get someone to edit, the running on dialogue does not make for a fun read.

This story has some promise. However, I think you should find an editor and a decent spell checker to help you. The spelling mistakes and lack of quotation marks for spoken lines was distracting.

No punctuation?

I'm looking forward to reading more. 😍

Not a ad story so far. You might want to vo back and reread. Rachel suddenly became Karen just a little bit confusing.😂

Quotation marks aren't optional.