All Comments on 'Anything You Want Ch. 01-05'

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PtmcPilotPtmcPilot12 days ago

An interesting premise, and I’m eager to see where this goes. And for the sex as well.

chipmonk9chipmonk911 days ago

Different from most stories keep it up

seittitgibseittitgib10 days ago

Looks very interesting, can't wait for more.

Sometimes instead of saying Matthew, it said Michael btw.

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

There's no point in including chapters if they are only paragraphs.

Qwer12Qwer128 days ago

Great start. Well played and well developed. Ready for more. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

This story has so much potential! I hope you continue working on it!

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