by genzsub
So hot. The dynamic between Vicki and Karen was really well done. Those two were in a dom/sub relationship before Vicki knew what she was doing. Jo is saving them a lot of money in psychiatrist fees!
I'm sure looking forward to what happens with Jo's "friend".
This was very, very hot and I am still trying to guess where this is going. I know where I want to go but I shall leave it to this admirable writer to decide where it shall go.
Like AliceGee, wondering where you are taking us/your characters and relationships. Have my suspicions and my preferences, but isn’t that a sign of a creative writer.
Amazing first rate chapter. So full of hot and at times wicked scenarios of how Jo got the two girls to perform so many sexy incidents - I’m loving it! The early image of Jo having both sisters suck at her nipples was immensely arousing; your descriptive narrative really brings it to life!!
I agree with other commenters the dynamic between the sisters was well done. I also know where I want this to go but will wait to learn what you have in mind. Collard and now leash , hitting every component to make this great.
I've always thought girls love to play. This was such a eye full. Now walked on a leash, I can't wait to get there "(!)"
Really well done, it feels like the whole story keeps building to a bigger climax. A wonderful blend of eroticism and tenderness.
This part was so delicious...the characterizations and sensuality got me wiggling and melting. Fantastic work!