All Comments on 'The Aftermath of a Marriage Pt. 02b'

by westjayne495

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
MigbirdMigbird10 days ago

Captured the simmering tumescence of the mutual “scenes”, and doing so while “talking” to your reader could not have been easy to create. Surprised to be honest how erotic this piece. And like you are building/moving the aftermath of a/your marriage. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

goodwabgoodwab10 days ago

Absolutely hypnotic erotic writing. Thanks. 5*

Wiz1002Wiz100210 days ago

Hi Jayne, wow, that was a masterpiece of erotica. Superb writing to capture the full effect and impact of how turned on you were during this cam session and your body and mind felt during this masturbatory event with Tom - it was almost hotter than actually having sex with another person. The description you provided of how your breasts felt during the fondling and caressing you gave them as you approached your climax was exquisite, and then how your fingers stimulated your clit, lips and pussy as you both came was out of this world. A near perfect story!!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userwestjayne495@westjayne495
Thoroughly enjoying my return to Lit, both writing stories and chatting. Love to hear from anyone who reads my stories and has any comments to make both positive and negative but please not anonymously! I am getting used to being separated and despite the lockdowns enjoying m...