All Comments on 'Maid Bare'

Im sorry, You could really use a creative writing class. Your just telling us what happened... like in a newspaper editorial. You are all tell and no show. The story is clumsy and doesnt flow at all. I was really looking forward to your story. Its the difference between reading a dictionary compared to a good story. Its like sex w/o fore play. Which equates to boring. I wish you the best of luck on further endevores.

Yeah that other guy is insane. I never comment and I'm commenting just to say that. This is extremely hot and evocative and better than a ton of the stories on this site, and there's plenty of description and 'show' without 'tell', she's an unreliable narrator as she's changed and that's half the point. Fantastic job and hits all my buttons.

I thought this story was phenomenal; told from the perspective of Claudette and being a sub, I appreciated her reluctance and eventual corruption. Maybe Master_Doctor's critique is subjective towards the main character and a dissatisfaction from the POV or her actions, but I thought given the tags and subject manner, this story was hot as fuck.

Amazing story! Only thing I would change is having longer climactic sex scene.

Loved the build up!

Loved the story and would like the story continued into a series. Longer sex scenes are needed. Build up was great. Keep this going.

Incredible story. Please keep writing! It would be fantastic as a series

That was the hottest thing I've read all year, well done

You just write some of the most creative mind control scenarios in such a convincing way. Excellent work once again!