All Comments on 'Temporary Boyfriend Ch. 05'

A very enjoyed tale to date. I like the interaction of the main characters as described.

Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

Very well written but I'm not necessarily happy where this seems to be going.

Three-way with girlfriend's sister?

If so, what started as a sweet romance turns into unlikely/silly male fantasy.

Agree with Niceguy2000, not liking the twist. Why the need to make this into an over the top wank story!!??

Another great five star story from Steve Wallace.

Over the top? Unlikely? Of course it is. You must not be familiar with the rest of his huge body of work. A threesome with the sister? Of course. The real question is whether the twins will join when does the mother.

If this is not your style, then there are thousands of alternatives here. At least 3400 folks follow Steve...

Whew!! Was starting to worry that Mr. Wallace was losing his touch. Now I see where this series will be going. Or am I assuming too much? Further chapters will be interesting (I hope). 5 stars.

Sorry, but this is getting too wacky. Maybe he should do the mom while dad watches.

Coming off the rails again...3.4*

This is the first story that I have read by this author. The story is well written, and I have followed it this far, but I suspect that the plot is going to go places that I personally would rather not go, so this is as far as I am going with it.

Josh the “player” is now being played by Taylor who despite seeming naive, knows exactly what she wants. She proclaimed her love for Josh, and seems magically totally uninhibited when it comes to sex. Taylor is very, very smart and incredibly beautiful, with, apparently, a body to die for with a sex drive to match. Josh clearly is in love with her despite his protestations to the contrary. He is stunned by Taylor’s proposal for him to transform her twin sister into another super-hot babe, and also participate in a threesome with them. For a man with all his sexual experience, Taylor blew his mind. This story is certainly over the top, but very well done and I look forward to the next chapter with Josh and the identical twins Taylor is an amazing creation by the author and I want to read more of her adventures with Josh.

Wow this storey is just getting better and better! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I took a look at your profile. My impression is this will be more of the same so I'm gonna pull the plug now instead of 56 chapters later.

Lovely premise continues.

Sex was really rushed.

Cock in mouth was so abrupt.

Rest of sex was similarly rushed.

Needed more than sudden nakedness. Needed looking. Admiring. Descriptions, certainly of her pussy. Shaved? Manicured? Hairy?

What are breasts like? Nipples? Are they sensitive? To what, in particular?

Might an offer of a bit of titty fucking not have been a good prelude to what was to follow?

Four stars.

Josh is doing better than did the patriarch Jacob of old. Jacob was indentured 7 years at the end of which he was cheated and got the sister he didn't want. He had to sign up for another 7 to get the sister he did want. Josh on the other had the sister come to him, was able to spec her out to suit, and now has the other sister fall into his lap with the same deal. Can't be beat! No muss no fuss! The only question remaining is will he be able to service the both of them properly. As it is he's shooting 4 loads a night and with identical twin Charlotte in the mix 8 will be the new 4. Time to call in the reserves? Great stuff! 5 stars.

Good story so far quirky and well written

Sounds very hot. It's been 45 years since I had someone watch me have sex. But it was a big turn on. And three women approached me wanting sex. I was doing it in a living room full of people. Wouldn't it be great if the guy ended up with both of them. No it wouldn't be the same with both of them. Each would be distinctly different because they are individuals.

I guess the masks are off.....

I agree with anonymous above. I too would like the build up to the sex scenes and the sex scenes themselves given more detail, which would increase the eroticism immeasurably.

first time reading this author. From comments below I realize I night be in over my head. I figured this was a "she has a magic pussy" story and the live happily ever after, all according to her deviously smart plan. I may have underestimated the zaniness here.

Lord help the mister who comes between me and my sister and Lord help the sister who comes between me and my man!

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