by DannyBell
Such a tease, i hope we're getting part 2 with that threesome, this one was amazing
Hot story, well written, kept my attention. My hubby and I did this online back in time from various hotels on a website where you could check out random people like us having sex. We watched several, thought it would be fun and anonymous but soon learned a network address embedded in my computer gave away our hotel locations and eventually our home location. We immediately stopped but the goodies were out on the web, at one local voyeur knew and contacted me. Now we'd lose our jobs and get smeared by the media.
Very interesting premise and nicely told. Those of us that are older don’t even consider the possibilities of the technology we have available today. Back in the day, live on FaceTime was unheard of. We had to be in the room to watch! LOL
Light, fun and captivatingly written. Great character builds. Is there a part 2 lingering?
Good premise.
Dialog somewhat stilted.
Needed for her to be directed/ordered/forced to explain what she was thinking about. Not just once, All through the story.
Four stars.