All Comments on 'A dog/slave Weekend Ch. 04'
by wolfiedog
- 5 Comments
Whackdoodle17 days agoThree issues.
He’s outside, exposed to the heat and cold.
A good Dom is prepared for the subs safety. The keys absolutely need to be accessible. Also, if I saw a strange person chained in my neighbours yard, I would be calling the cops.
People call the cops for everything and you Dan bet the neighbour would have called the cops even if only to do a welfare check.
Use that as part of the story, don’t ignore it.
assiduous_reader12 days agoIt is nice to see a story were the couple do thing for fun and not hate each other. Keep writing!
Anonymous12 days agoWow, you have a key eye on something, I can't wait to read what happened next. but you should at least have or had her keep the set keys like she forgot that she had them on her. but it is your story that your telling us
Anonymous10 days agoExcellent story. One thing that struck me as out of place was the puppy's ability to talk. Dogs bark. They do not talk.
