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Ignore this: eeech!

I find your submissions interesting. You seem genuinely opening up to us, the readers, about your sex life & beliefs. I don't think anyone should denigrate you for what you believe in or practice, in fact I find it tittilating even though I may not do it.

My only criticism is that you should take a little more care with your writing skills. Then you would find the readers who enjoy this subject matter,would find your work more enjoyable.

Please don't get sensitive. If you submit publicly, you are asking for public critics.

Keep writing.

I find your submissions interesting. You seem genuinely opening up to us, the readers, about your sex life & beliefs. I don't think anyone should denigrate you for what you believe in or practice, in fact I find it tittilating even though I may not do it.

My only criticism is that you should take a little more care with your writing skills. Then you would find the readers who enjoy this subject matter,would find your work more enjoyable.

Please don't get sensitive. If you submit publicly, you are asking for public critics.

Keep writing.

you are just not thinking for 2 cents, I'm already sorry I said that. but what has come from the idea in the last chapter? quote: When we eventually decide to start a family, we have agreed that all this will stop and remain a nice memory until the kids have grown up, at which time, we'll see.

end of quote...... and who the fuck is Richard ? just to tell you something if anybody finds out your kind of unfit parents because you let impregnate your wife several times by different guys, so you have like 4 kids and 4 fathers and none of them is your's and you continue to have swinging sessions eventhough you have little or not so little kids anymore, they will take them away from you. happend to a couple (both white) and 3 black kids from 3 different guys and they had there own homepage where the husband filmed everything and sold the movies to there clientele. just happend to be the neighbour when they did the house search.

But one thing you failed to mention is at least in the UK you can go to any doctor and pay a fee and you can get anonymous sperm from sperm banks. There is no need to go out and let your wife fuck someone else simply because you are firing blanks. If you sat your wife down and asked her to be honest with you she would tell you she is doing this breeding thing just to get more dick. She is not and never will be exclusively yours ever again. I hope you do have kids so that one day they will ask why they don't look like you and you can turn to your wife( if you are still married) and say okay honey you tell them how many dicks you fucked and continue to fuck. That would be an interesting question to answer. By the way I only put your score at zero because of the content of this story. The writing itself is fine. I just can't believe you are or have done what your story tells us.

Who will the kids call when they need medical historys for any reason? When they need blood transfusions? When they may need organ donors? This may be a great adventure for you but you are putting children thru years of anguish trying to determine their real medical history and genetic lineage. What if one day some man walks up and demands a DNA test on your children to determine if he is the father or not. And then sues you for some preceived act on your part for his child? Or demands custody of the child? You of course they will eventually determine are not their father and they will grow up to disrespect you and hate your guts. Sorry but learn to live in reality not fantasy.

WHAT AN UTTERLY CRAP to say that "most women do this anyway but just keep quiet about it and deliberately deceive their partners"!THIS IS NOT TRUE AT ALL!NO WOMAN WHO IS TRULY A WOMAN and not a slut EVER DOES THIS!Very few women deliberately deceive their partners and that NTO BECAUSE THEY ALLEGEDLY "choose with whom they breed",but BECAUSE OF TOTALLY OTHER REASONS!WOMAN AREN'T ANIMALS for whom the survival of the species is a PURE INSTINCT!THEY ARE HUMANS and HUMANS ARE CHOOSING THEIR PARTNER FOR LOVE or,at least passion,NOT FOR BREEDING!STOP WITH THESE PATHETICAL TRIES to justify what CAN'T BE EVER JUSTIFIED,you ASSHOLE!

umm always cracks me up this half way liberation justifying the degradation of the male (usually)if you want liberation open the marriage wide open but this freedom for one I do not understand, no matter how hard i have tried. I have been asked into one of these relationships as a bull 3 times now,,, just fucking no honestly i haven't even been able to continue a friendship with the guy after i was asked to this day i miss the loss of the friendship. Though i can accept the do your thing part i have no interest in cheating with a couple or a single every so often i force myself to finish reading one of these hoping for an epiphany so maybe i could face them again without some part of me judging their kink because really its there life and i knew what they were into and i was a friend right up till then so i don't know maybe this is all just cheap therapy good writing though i enjoyed the writing if not the premise hope this made sense i am not ready to even write anything myself yet so ,take it for what it's worth