All Comments on 'Wolf's Den Ch. 04'

Love it! This is a really good story! The plot is getting good! Cant wait for the next chapter! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

Well, that's kind of an understatement -- this is great!!! Like romance-novel quality! Can't wait for the next chapter. So PLEASE HURRY!

I am loving this story. Please continue soon.

I like how it's building. There will be lots of misunderstandings, but with the best of intentions, it looks like. Can't wait for more.

I like the plot but slow it down and develop the story, the characters and what's happening. Too many things are going on at the same time. It was great how you explained why and how she felt responsible for her parent's death but it's unrealistic for her to have ended up in his bed and then she goes wandering in the compound and she's attacked by Jaques and Brig...For a pack that's now united there seems to be no respect, its conflicted. Keep writing it, you're going to get better.

i can not wait for more. but i also think u should not rush the story. like other have said work the characters out it will make it a better story.

That was a wonderful chapter as always I hate that it was so short. keep'em coming.

I wouldn't mind you taking longer and combining two chapters together. That would make a good length and would be much more satisfying to read.

Keep them coming!!

I love the thread of the story and the characters are showing promise, but the story is too short to get truly hooked, if you know what I mean. You can't really get to know the characters that you are introducing in the newest installment. I also would love more description of the bad guy... All in all though, 5 stars. You are very talented. I look forward to reading more in the future!

Please Post more... I am starting to get into this... am really looking forward to where this goes!

Okay, waiting for next segment, soon please?

I really want to know what happens next! It's getting interesting!

please please write some more soon...the wait is killing me!

Very nice! I wonder what will happen next. Please write more.

write more! i'm excited to read what happens next.

I really like the story so far. However, it is a bit short. Please get the next chapter out soon!!

I love the character development and story line. Please write more soon! It is just getting good...

I love the story please continue it.

I really really loved wolf's den, i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

i luvved ur story soo much but i will -- i don't know what I will do if you don't put out another chapter

Waiting, rather impatiently, for the next chapter. Another talented author graces the Literotica site.

when will you add on????

Pls do complete this story...a hell lot of time has passed....eagerly waiting !!!!

how tangled up will things get...set up is there for lots of misinterpretations/misunderstandings like torrin thinking she's a spy, etc. ....hope it isn't too long b4 things are figured out...

And didn't she turn that freak ex who killed her parents over to the cops? or is she waiting for him to come get her?

hope you'll be sending more chapters to us soon!

This is just teasing me!! Can't wait to read more, even if it is just another teasing chapter lol

I am really enjoying the build up. The crazy murduring ex has definately got to be more than he seems. Looking forward to how you will start to tie it all together. Lisette has to be something special in the story for fate to have brought all of these events together. I have a feeling that all of the circumstances in her life will be culminating together to make her situation more clear in the not too distant future, but that doesn't mean there won't be more of this wonderful struggle of hers against it before they all accept the enevitable. Great job! Very interested to read more.

This was really good. Please don't leave me hanging!

please would you continue this story as I am hooked!!!! and want to see where you take us with it...

I love this story and wish you would continue it so we can see where it goes from here.

Don't keep us in suspense for much longer. Great tale, wonderful characters. So looking forward to more. : )

The buildup to the story is great. I'd love to see more written about this little adventure, it has great promise.

I am loving this story but need more, it is a greast start but i sit here patiently waiting for more!!

I love the direction your story is going and the characters, but please, continue with the story!!! I've been waiting patiently for months on end now!!!

It reminds me a little bit of Leader of the Pack which is one of my all time favorites. I'm liking that your female character still has some friends and family of her own along with a past that will make the story interesting on so many levels. Hope you can update soon because I've read through just these 4 chapters twice already.

... but where is the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting for too long. I like where this story is heading and I'm wondering if James is a were who killed Lisette's parents to force mating. Keep up the excellent writing.

This looks like the start of an amazing story... WHY IS IT NOT BEING UPDATED!!! :,,,,,(

I just read this story for the first time today and love it! Please say that there is more coming.

This is really nice. A gentle easing in to the story. You have made Torrin so very lovable and sweet not in a pussy whipped way, but manfully rich and protective. We like it very much so far. Please keep going..............please

I love this story, could you please post some more :)

I was enjoying reading this story. I am really sad it is not being updated. I hope it gets updated soon!

its such a pity the last chapter was posted over 2 years ago .. there is protencial for a great read .. pity!

THIS STORY HAD SUCH GREAT POTENTIAL!!!

I wonder if this person will ever come back and finish her story I hope so I like this story alot man Ill keep cheaking but GOSH i wanted to keep reading :(

Please Please Post Next Chapter Soon

...but please come back and finish your story.

...come back and finish! This is a great story.

I agree! Please come back!!

...when a talented author like yourself STARTS a brilliant story, but then goes and leaves us hanging!

we need more!

come back and write for us again, the stories are great, we just need more of them!!!

please? ;)

k_k

To update and finish the series soon.

A very good development of already interesting earlier writing. May our author feel inspired to continue and conclude, before there are only werewolves alive who remember when the story began.

Yet another well written but unfinished tale. Such a shame, I fear after all this time we will never know the end of the story.

I guess I will have to imagine the rest of this amazing story... *sigh* and it was so good too......

why start a story if you arent going to finish it???????

Nice story. Wish you had finished it. But really enjoyed the storyline you created.

Great story but the author has vanished.