by BrianCaster
The writer needs English lessons. The story may really be good but it is too hard to follow because the English is so bad.
I stopped reading after the first couple paragraphs as there was too many spelling, and gramatical errors to even make sense of what the writer intended.
...and apparently, Literotica helps not either. Stick to lightsabers, Yoda. Sucked this story did greatly.