All Comments on 'One Night with the Bushy Whore'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yikes

Stupid, poorly written, not erotic, this sucked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
English

The writer needs English lessons. The story may really be good but it is too hard to follow because the English is so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Too Many Gramatical Mistakes To Read

I stopped reading after the first couple paragraphs as there was too many spelling, and gramatical errors to even make sense of what the writer intended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wars not great one make

...and apparently, Literotica helps not either. Stick to lightsabers, Yoda. Sucked this story did greatly.

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