All Comments on 'A Bed Time Story'

But I doubt we will see it in English literature.

Now THAT was hot!

But there were several spelling and grammar mistakes that really hurt you. You call him a Rouge Knight, which would be a knight wearing make-up. You mean a Rogue Knight.

good read!

Great descriptions! I look forward to reading more.

He's a knight... So she wouldn't refer to him as a lord... Only as a Sir... Really ruins the whole thing.

The word is ROGUE, not ROUGE! Rouge is what women put on their face to bring color to their cheeks. Argh!!

Sorry to go bonkers, but this is one of my "hot buttons".

This wonderful first chapter of this story has a good introduction, interesting characters, and unusual for a romance, a setting in a different time. The plot never lets up for a moment, although the love scene is briefer than one might have hoped, given the talent of the writer. Quibbles about grammar or punctuation shall not be dwelt upon here.