by vicegod
Really good story. I like how Jada can be submissive to her friend but still not lose her boyfriend. Kinda like to see Brandy get taken down a notch; she's just a bit too smug for my taste but that's just personal preference.
Very nice story. I liked the control Brandy has and if anything I would prefer her to get more power, maybe manipulating Jason into humiliating and hurting her gf more.
And why is she still there? Too implausible. She would have taken her stuff and left long ago. The rest is unbelievable.
I'd call this implausible but I have met chicks like this. Some women are so submissive they can't do anything but what they are told.
More, more, more...please. Great story 5-stars!
Should be in non-con/reluctance. They'd love it over there.
Would love to read the third chapter.
(plenty of anal would also be awesome...Brandy loses her anal cherry for the finale)
This was simply awful. I hope she kicked him in the balls and left him permanently.
You need a shrink for your sick fantasy or a 10 foot log shoved up your arse your story is not even worth the paper its written on good to wipe your arse bleeding arse with though
Yep the first lesson is how to cut arsehole's dick off and shove it down his throat
Second lesson how to shove a barbed wire up the whores twat
Third lesson how to shit all over this stupid story
I just have to wonder if any of the people getting so shook up with this story are the same ones who were bitching about the first chapter? If so why did you read it? If you read the first one you should have known what the second one was gonna be like.