by fiestyyredhead
If you are going to write about an orgy, at least learn to spell it.
One of the worst stories ever and I like group sex but the writing here is just pathetic.
If you don't appreciate Angel's writing don't read it! & definitely don't comment on it, that's just nasty. Personally Angel, I thought this was brilliant, who cares if there's a few spelling mistakes? Not me! VERY erotic, thankyou + keep writing!