All Comments on 'Shortening His Sentence Ch. 02'

by SugarandSalt

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wooow

A great story continues - you write so well and they are people with issues and personalities - not just sex objects. But the scenario - well done looking foreward to part 3

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 11 years ago
Dam

Another great chapter, just love the whole scenerio, wish i was foster

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
fuck

i came before brenda did thank you

tim607tim607over 11 years ago
Fantastic

Another great story! I look forward to your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent!!!!!!!!

Part 2 is great. The only problem is it wasn't 4 or 5 pages long. Can't wait for the next episode. S&S Good work!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Great story great writing great nut...Pt 3 please! Thank u in advance

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story - hoping for a chapter 3!

This is my first time reading one of your stories - I'm hooked and will be watching for your posts from now on. Thanks for writing and hope you get a third chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
part 3

please write the next part soon really hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Porn King

You are such a creative writer, your stories really have us wanting more. You should do more about Kevin and Brenda ;)

shemalelover2013shemalelover2013almost 11 years ago
Amazing!

Very nice, just as hot as Part 1, can't wait for the next part, hope it comes soon <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Part 3 please!

Are you ever going to continue this one, I've loved it so far and would really enjoy another perfect chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Part 3?

I would love a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Could you write a brutal/rape part. It would probably eventually happen to him anyways

uncomonnerduncomonnerdover 10 years ago
dont leave us hanging

this is a great story please please chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
No climax

Please do chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please

Please continue the story

Ike_The_SpikeIke_The_Spikeabout 9 years ago
love this series

I'd really love to see more in this series. If looks like a story that could have growth in the characters as well as a lot more hot sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Chapter 3

I've read pretty much all your writing, and I love this series the most. Please do another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love

Would LOVE to be in his place !!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More please

This is my favorite story on this website please keep making more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot!

Want MORE horny shemale SEX!

MasterdcMasterdcalmost 6 years ago
Great read

Need part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Overdue conclusion

Hot. Like all you work. Fuel for the spank bank.

interdictrinterdictrover 4 years ago
MORE

More please, you cant stop there!

bigcowboy36bigcowboy36almost 4 years ago

anothher part please this made me so hard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Disappointed

You've blue balled us sugarandsalt im dissapointed

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

NEED CHAPTER 3!!

Client8Client8over 3 years ago
Good story but not enuff ass action for me

The story line was entertaining but a bit too much forced oral for my liking. Needed more anal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Damn I want an ending ,warden and foster need to end up in a relationship after he’s released!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Where is the next chapter???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is beyond amazing and I need part 3

aglex59aglex594 months ago

Such a good story....and a third chapter is necessary, I want to know how Foster will enjoy being fucked by Desiree.

Pethair63Pethair634 months ago

Wow! Very nice, now anticipation for a third an main attraction ❤️

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