All Comments on 'Young Mary Ch. 7'

by Red Hugh

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
surprisingly cold....

...it felt like you were writing from a really remote position. very descriptive but where were the feelings?

redone6566redone6566over 8 years ago
meg?

I assume meg was introduced to the storyline in chap #5 which seems to be missing?

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