All Comments on 'Nude Day Audition'

Voted a 5+ good Sir! Twinks like Joey are a rare find indeed; not only willing to record fellating a total stranger on his camera, but remaining keener to accept anal ejaculation at no additional cost.

Good story. It flowed well. The pace was nice. The nude exhibitionism was extremely exciting. The men's anticipation of sex together well presented. Michael was a believable developed character. You tried to explain Joey as someone with a gift in his body & sex appeal, but not very intelligent. You might have filled him out more about an ambition with a logical plan to succeed. I loved the ending with the message from Jason Rivers. Thought that showed you had a real spark of imagination. Wish you luck with the contest.

with chesthairslave and anon - this is an excellent piece of work - as is chs's comment. Best I have read here in a long time.

I agree with the others. Good story.

Nicely done, Slyc! Very well written, the action was hot, and the situation both creative and believable.

Nice story...fantacised about situations like this a lot. Could make a book along these lines.296f

others, butt would want Michael's ramming my holes, at my command. Luv the outdoors part, hope there is a sequel.

Very hot, erotic story that made me hard while reading it. That's usually the idea, right?

I really enjoyed reading your story. I've enjoyed a similar experience, but unfortunately, no photography was involved...