by prettygirlaspen
Loved it until the very end, it would have been perfect without the bit at the end about how it was all a fantasy.
Hot little story. Doesn't waste any time, but gets right to it! Don't think the last two paragraphs really add anything tho.
Love your story....fantasy is all in the mind...and your mind is an enormous erotica fantasy land! The surprise ending was great. I had a little trouble keeping track of who was doing or saying what to whom or whomever.....but other than that.......AWESOME!!!! Wish I would have read all of these before I commented on your work in progress. xoxoxo sweetcheeks