All Comments on 'Double Time'

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playman64playman64over 10 years ago
Nice

Enjoying jacking off to your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mostly awesome

Loved it until the very end, it would have been perfect without the bit at the end about how it was all a fantasy.

walkerlongwalkerlongover 10 years ago

Hot little story. Doesn't waste any time, but gets right to it! Don't think the last two paragraphs really add anything tho.

maturensa4umaturensa4uabout 10 years ago
In the end....

Love your story....fantasy is all in the mind...and your mind is an enormous erotica fantasy land! The surprise ending was great. I had a little trouble keeping track of who was doing or saying what to whom or whomever.....but other than that.......AWESOME!!!! Wish I would have read all of these before I commented on your work in progress. xoxoxo sweetcheeks

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