All Comments on 'The Affair'

by jenniferleigh

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
a neglected wife stumbles into .......

adultery : this Neglected Wife device has been used by you in a story too Jen : 5-ed just for the heart-break & cunning deviousness of the protagonist

jenniferleighjenniferleighalmost 10 years agoAuthor
I infuse my feelings into my writing

I haven't had an affair, but I do write what I know. And I know about feeling abandoned.

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredalmost 10 years ago
Needs must when the devil drives

Who do I feel sorry for here? I'm with...

Very good 5ed

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
New thrills

Final stanza explains it all, coupled with "A union made in lust." Oh the torment in seeking new thrills.

The_BathsThe_Baths18 days ago

Rings true, strong feeling and time will drive one to action. Thanks for sharing!

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