All Comments on 'Twin Awakenings Ch. 04'

Love it just remember the name Amie :)

Billy run too the hills if you value your life.

I admit to being rather jaded on a lot of stories and having very limited patience for poor writing. Yes there are some grammatical errors, however you have a unique writing style that works very well for your story, and have created a very interesting main character. I very much look forward to reading more, and I think that with time and practice, you have the potential to become one of the top writers on this site. Nice job.

Billy baby you better get gone fast. Loving the twins although brother needs the confidence/knowledge like his sister. She is no joke and I love her to death. Waiting to see where this goes and what fun they will have. Little momma in the woods, where did she come from and how was she there without them knowing? Update soon please. The name is Lea or call me Gen. Love ya, peace.

For the love of god and in the name of all that’s holy get a phuqing editor for this story! It’s really good but damn, reseeded?!? What the phuq? The correct word is receded, meaning to back up to go back into. Reseeded is for phuqing lawns. He reseeded his lawn to get grass that appeared more lush. Contractions, they exist so phuqing use them! It’s like your religion prevents you from using them or you’re allergic to them or something! I repeat, the story is really good but those grammatical and spelling errors phuq up the reading experience and make me want to hit you upside the head with a phuqing dictionary and a thesaurus!

Not your run of the mill were story. I'm am excited to continue reading.

If you want it edited so bad to bitch about it, do it yourself...then submit it to the author, who was kind enough to share his/her vivid imagination on this FREE website.