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My Erotic Taleover 18 years agomention
Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey....Art~
sackover 18 years agoexceptional
very vivid, you could almost see the leaf eddying around as it descended!
twelveooneover 18 years ago*
Poised before impossibility
I pause to pontificate
Drifting down
on a sigh of serendipity-
I think quite overblown
Belegonover 18 years agoI like the image...
...although I know the example is one I would have trouble following. The ability to accept and travel without struggling seems to be quite beyond me.
hugo_samover 18 years agoIn the minds eye.
The leaf was present in the minds eye, and tickled your thought.
Anonymousover 18 years agowho would have thought
the simplistic leaf could bring about such beautiful poetry?
Awesome Job, beautiful!
*i've always been a fan of 'pontificate'...*smile**
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