All Comments on 'Curious Detective Agency'

I like the idea behind the poem. It needs more, though. I did mention your poem on the poetry forum, on the new poems thread. I hope you work on this one a bit more. :)

I have read quite q lot of your work and it intrigues me , sometimes I am not sure why. With this it seems as though you could say more, but perhaps not in the same poem? Muddled again perhaps(me that is) but you are very readable so I'll keep coming back.

I like it as it is, I think it tells the whole story very well and I know exactly where you are coming from

just a bit, or perhaps not mesh as well (at least for me) as I would like. Interesting poem, as always, though.