All Comments on 'Eating Out'

Welcome to Lit with this piece that while nicely suggestive, falls into that dangerous trap of sounding rather trite by slipping into cliché {the peach}. Don't be discouraged; it's a common trap writers fall into, hoping all the while to sound original.

This rendering on the subject of eating a peach ~ makes you want to recall the joy of every peach you have ever eaten.

..when I was a little girl I loved eating Georgia peaches. The juice dripped off my chin and fell to the floor.. but now it doesn't...fall to the floor. So now I finish up with the most juiciest nipples that you've ever tasted.