by asknoquarter
..when I was a little girl I loved eating Georgia peaches. The juice dripped off my chin and fell to the floor.. but now it doesn't...fall to the floor. So now I finish up with the most juiciest nipples that you've ever tasted.
This rendering on the subject of eating a peach ~ makes you want to recall the joy of every peach you have ever eaten.
Welcome to Lit with this piece that while nicely suggestive, falls into that dangerous trap of sounding rather trite by slipping into cliché {the peach}. Don't be discouraged; it's a common trap writers fall into, hoping all the while to sound original.