All Comments on 'Erratica'

by Remec

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AngelineAngelineover 15 years ago
This is excellent!

I love the metaphors ("brown paper therapy" "Peroxide Princess") and the ending really pulls the poem together and explains the title. Wonderful to see you poeming here again! :-)

Recommended in today's New Poems reviews.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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GREAT POEM! Love this: clutching Dr Mad-Dog to/my chest and indulging in my own/brand of brown paper therapy after/the Peroxide Princess sent me to the curb

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
excellent piece

This is a stellar little portrait. Your sense of phrase and rhythm is damn fine, and I like what a distinct voice you have. Voice is everything, really.

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