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Click hereThe pulse of life gets slower at each beat
And as we can control it all with pills
Too soon our victory will be complete.
Now that sweet milk is poison from the teat
- A mother's only a machine that kills -
The pulse of life gets slower at each beat.
The dagger glistens up the crowded street
Admired by the steady hand that drills -
Too soon our victory will be complete.
For those who die it is no use to greet
The emperor - he's green about the gills;
The pulse of life gets slower at each beat
And we don't stop to hear the stray lambs bleat
But let them lose themselves among the hills;
Too soon our victory will be complete
And sad, slow nature must admit defeat;
As we point blank refuse to pay her bills
The pulse of life gets slower at each beat -
Too soon our victory will be complete.
Further to your question there are all sorts of replacements you could use. Looking at the poem again: "I'm sure", "And soon", "You know", "Be sure" all work better that "Ere Long". Your call - I'm sure you'll find a wonderful phrase to delight us. Sweet O.
Not sure if the antiquated "Ere longs" quite work though.
the species will end immediately in the near future passed. TK U MLJ LV NV