All Comments on 'Full Stop'

by demure101

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IF EVERYTHING LEFT IS TOXIC

the species will end immediately in the near future passed. TK U MLJ LV NV

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 12 years ago
Nice Villanelle

Not sure if the antiquated "Ere longs" quite work though.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 12 years ago
Further Feedback

Further to your question there are all sorts of replacements you could use. Looking at the poem again: "I'm sure", "And soon", "You know", "Be sure" all work better that "Ere Long". Your call - I'm sure you'll find a wonderful phrase to delight us. Sweet O.

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