by clarkcrow
many years ago here in India a famous playback singer Kishore Kumar wrote & composed a haunting ballad which is still popular to this day ----AAMI NEI which in Bengali means I am Not !
today Kishoreda is no longer with us but in his music he is immortal so is your poem O clarkcrow , so is your I am Gone ---even when you will truly be gone future generations will hum this song ,this poem & you will be immortalized !
As I told you before...I'm not a poetry reader but I read this one because I am getting to know you. You invoked some very vivid imagery. I liked this poem.
Great poem, interesting and captivating images and thoughts.
Strong ending.
Recommended.