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by Sapphire_O
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bluerainsover 16 years agoam not
very good at being a person to critique ..but , this has a nice even flow ...laid back and placed well to the mind to feel the images and the message...I enjoyed reading it...bluerains
Bill Dadaover 16 years ago^
Sadly powerful. You really captured how much he filled up your life and how hard it is to let go of someone who is no longer there.
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