All Comments on 'Journey'

I really enjoyed this poem. Great images. I hope you continue to write and submit poems, and please feel free to join in at the forum if you'd like more feedback on your writing (or just to shoot the breeze and/or flirt with us!).

I do think your poem would benefit from punctuation--and definitely from spell check to correct those typos before everyone reads you. :-)

Your poem was recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!