All Comments on 'Just to See You'

where there is always something interesting found

because as Harry says this is an interesting poem with lots going on. It feels telescopic to me. As the lines unfold there is an sense of progression that moves logically to that last line. I don't think this piece grabs me or has the shock value that I have experienced in other poems you've posted. Also this may be one example where the prose structure works against the theme. Have you explored other structures, I wonder? But that is just one opinion offered respectfully. :-)

I've been experiementing with this prose style for a few years. I love blocks of text and alternating the use of long and short sentences to create movement in a piece. Most of it is rambling, in all fairness, but I'm really glad that people appreciate it.