All Comments on 'Soft Glow Moonlight'

in a fantasyland kind of way, but i feel it would benefit from you rethinking the clichs, not worry so much about creating a rhyme, and making sure your typos are corrected.

you could take this little thing and make it prettier :)

typos:

and through here I see ... her, yes?

trodding - treading

if english is not your first language, then i commend your writing anyway. keep at it :)

zen-tastic (~.-)

Chipbutty I'm afraid spelling has never been a strong suit of mine and being the writer tends to obscure those little mistakes but thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it!

A nice read and better constructed than many rhyming poems we see on here, Chip has already mentioned the typos and by the way what is a Grandfather tree? An old one?

He represents the forest resisting time and change, he is old and large and in the end peaceful yet stubborn, how I view the forest. He might have different meanings for others but that is what I felt when I wrote it.

Always aiming to please

-Uriziel-