All Comments on 'Strawberry in the winter'

by lonelyhousewife32

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Interesting

this is where you want to go

Whispers on my tongue

Hint of season to come

it begins to say something wonderful

4ed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Simple and elegant

This was simple and elegant, like a strawberry... or love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
*****

I would shorten the title by leaving 'the' out, but I think this was an excellent first effort.

Five.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous