- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Stupid Head, Stupid Heart
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Stupid head
I'd be better off dead
Than again listen to you
Cause you made me blue
You led me to pain
Now there's nothing to gain
How could you be so stupid?
Look what you did
You placed me in misery
Didn't think what was best for me
As if you weren't part of this body
You didn't care not to be naughty
You picked the wrong choice
Now I must silence your voice
Get off of my shoulders
From you I'm taking no more orders
Stupid heart
You're torn apart
You're barely beating
Because this whole thing
I know I was dumb
I tried to make you numb
Now you're hurt
Been thrown in the dirt
Why didn't you shout?
Instead of silently pout
You should of been there for me
Shown me what I couldn't see
But now you're broken
And I'm lost again
How can I fix you?
Again make you like new
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoi agre with the "short lines" guy but i also see that this is a depressing poem so it kinda calls for it. i believe that people think in shortness when they're depressed and ready to end their lives, just how this poem is. good job in showing this!
jthserraover 18 years agoshort lines and the use of couplets make the rhyme feel forced and gratutious. You might want to work rhyming alternating lines which will help de-emphasize the rhyme here.
jim : )
