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All Comments on 'The Pace of Life's Race'

by LuciousBi-Writes4U

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice...for a pre-schooler!

Wow...you rhyme words good! GROW UP

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Indeed, leave the Rat Races for as long as you can and smell those roses.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
this part.......

Blurring the faces

As we bump brief cases

Up and down packed staircases

Rushing in an out of work spaces

i really like very much. overall very nice.....don

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
rat race

I saw those guys racing each other in the alley of a city street the other day <grin...nice poem

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