All Comments on 'Theology of Ardor'

A good one, tapping into that fantasy of the good catholic school girl, especially when she's pushing thirty and still exploring the bounds of original sin...

a Darkmaas poem! You bring a lyrical quality to everything you touch. Good to read you again.I will always love your Dark feel in Wormwood, one of the best poems I have ever read on this site.

This poem was mentioned in Saturday's New Poems Reviews.

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The "swallow hard" refrain moves the poem along, and the break from "make a..." to "genuflect" in the last strophe conveys a tone that is rather staid and rather shocking at once. Well done. :-)