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I thought there were a few things here that made this not one of your better submissions, but then, I love spinach, even if there is a little sand with it.

I got to the adjective "carnal" and my mind wanted to see a noun after it. Just habit, probably.

And I'm of a divided mind, about the final word, "lovin' "...

It makes a powerful ending, but doesn't quite seem to fit with the prior elegance of the poem. Nevertheless, it's all so good. I doubt my praise means much, but I found it quite lovely.