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demure101about 11 years agoAuthormissing line
In the second stanza I omitted the fifth line:
"Not long enough to thaw their cold, drawn faces,"
Ouch. Too hasty again...
Compliant1about 11 years agoTake a break
Your work will improve if you wait until you have something to say and not just the desire to say something. There is a lot of that going on around here.
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