All Comments on 'Your Face'

needs a tiny tad bit of technical tweaking (punctuation mainly) but not so much that it detracts from the poem. Simply sugary, I like it!

Beautiful hon. A wonderful effort concidering it's the first you've written in such a long time. I hope to see you continue along this path and push yourself more. I have no doubts that you will create magic with your words

*hugs*

~E~

sums up how i am feeling today about someone special

pj

Your words flow effortlessly, and are eloquent in their simplicity.

Beautifully done Mav! Would that I could inspire words as sweet from one who would be the world to me.

*drops a kiss, soft upon your brow*

Totally Excellent - Dude!

I love it! Keep up the good work!

What a sweet poem...Wish someone wrote something like that to/about me.

This is a beautiful poem MM. Truly lovely and sweet. I'm already looking forward to the sequel.

gentle and kind, sweet, a lovely poem- enjoyed it very much

maria

Simple, direct and enjoyable to read-I'm not much into poetry but I know what I like and this is it!

That was awsome.. i so enjoyed that ...

Very nice. Flowed smoothly. Felt good. And good emotions disclosed.

Good to see actual poetry posted. Thank you.

Beautifully done Mav.

Loved it from start to finish.

To the last poster: Poetry isn't always romeo and juliet, rhyme and symmetrical.

It's words, painting a picture.

This, was beautiful, thank you MaverickMan.

I think that poem expresses very well the kind of love that most of us hope to find someday and a few of us have been lucky enough to have already found!

And one day maybe someone will tell me something as simple but as beautifull! Then, I'll know I am loved!

Very sensitive!

Didi xoxo

I have seen that face, lived with it. Well done!

Blooze

I could have put 200 if it was there!!!

So romantic, geez, so beautifull! I just LOVED it dear Wizard!

Thank you for this poem.