by MaverickMan
I could have put 200 if it was there!!!
So romantic, geez, so beautifull! I just LOVED it dear Wizard!
Thank you for this poem.
And one day maybe someone will tell me something as simple but as beautifull! Then, I'll know I am loved!
Very sensitive!
Didi xoxo
I think that poem expresses very well the kind of love that most of us hope to find someday and a few of us have been lucky enough to have already found!
Beautifully done Mav.
Loved it from start to finish.
To the last poster: Poetry isn't always romeo and juliet, rhyme and symmetrical.
It's words, painting a picture.
This, was beautiful, thank you MaverickMan.
Very nice. Flowed smoothly. Felt good. And good emotions disclosed.
Good to see actual poetry posted. Thank you.
Simple, direct and enjoyable to read-I'm not much into poetry but I know what I like and this is it!
This is a beautiful poem MM. Truly lovely and sweet. I'm already looking forward to the sequel.
What a sweet poem...Wish someone wrote something like that to/about me.
Your words flow effortlessly, and are eloquent in their simplicity.
Beautifully done Mav! Would that I could inspire words as sweet from one who would be the world to me.
*drops a kiss, soft upon your brow*
Beautiful hon. A wonderful effort concidering it's the first you've written in such a long time. I hope to see you continue along this path and push yourself more. I have no doubts that you will create magic with your words
*hugs*
~E~
needs a tiny tad bit of technical tweaking (punctuation mainly) but not so much that it detracts from the poem. Simply sugary, I like it!