by JellyPie
I want more of this story as well please because I want to see what happens to her. So please more chapters of this story as well please.Thank you very much.
Mmmm, i wouldnt call that a BAD day!! i would love to be double fucked by tentacles!
I can successfully say you executed this story i loved it best tentacle sex storie ever
I've read quite a few tentacle sex stories, but not many authors can quite pull it off. You also brought a very surreal feeling to the story, quite appropriate to the setting. A highly creative and arousing tale, great work.
As the other person said, its like a passage out of the middle of a book. How did Gwen get there, what is the history of the dream world, and who is this lover of her's?
...a writer but need to practice the format of a story, not just a 'passage'. For instance, since your description states it, have her actually "go" there, first. Not many people like to read one page out of the middle of a book.