All Comments on 'A Beautiful Day in Elteran Ch. 02'

it started out really good and then faltered. it felt like you were rushing to find an ending. you should have made it into an incest story without the beheadings

A bit like fairy tale. But thanks :) .

A children's tale with a little sex and violence added.

i like good fantasy lore, would you, could you, pleaes. End this ache for long overdue justice. I would like to see, all that is giving returned ten-fold. Lust what an ugly emotion, when only one can feel it.

I can only hope we will see more on this story in the near future... I enjoyed it very much.

plese i just got done reading both stories and loved them both i can hardly waite to find out what happens next

Please keep going with this story.

... is NOT erotic.

please continue

do continue this gripping tale

Please continue

please continue this story.

you have to continue this story!!!!!!!

Please finsh the story I want more.

Yes yes please continue...getting good...maybe chapter's could be longer