All Comments on 'A Brother's Love Ch. 02'

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lonely_vlonely_vabout 17 years ago
wow

You are a wonderful writer I hope you continue writing for us thanks very much

I love this story

calibeachgirlcalibeachgirlalmost 12 years ago
What a story!

I hope that you consider continuing the tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very confusing for the most part

Clarity would have been nice. The ending cleared things up, however.

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeabout 4 years ago
Unbelievable.

I am basically torn between reading the rest of the chapters or calling it quits.This story is just so heartbreaking and yet so joyous I am so conflicted about the characters of Matt,Lena,& Kit.

To have Matt shield Lena and save her even tho it cost him his was just heartwarming.But also to find out Kits Mom did pretty much the same thing for Kit by distracting her Husband so Kit could escape was touching beyond belief.And now both Kit and Lena can now see ghosts or spirits.

Its not that I hate stories like these,but it just makes me an emotional mess,crying at sad moments and smiling at happy ones.So for a day or two I will think about whether I want to continue or not.But to the author personally you have written a truly magical story that deserves praise.Thank you.

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